【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- v" K! [' i" s# O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 }( G/ x9 P3 k0 y9 E4 b& V* fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( H3 [6 V  y& k+ L& Z( j  ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ O, ~* o) ?2 E8 E& T" A( NThe sky is happy down to its soul
. _, L3 I! A( \9 c7 ?$ FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 A9 p- N9 Y9 c2 QYou needn’t fear anything
9 v) k' K" C" z' k, d$ V0 n2 NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; f3 ~% t# s: R2 ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' M0 |& c' D# @9 i# G9 n0 @, X1 SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. \6 [; n/ E, EI want so much to see inside your heart
" A: L* j+ ^# P/ U' BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! p( m# e& v2 w5 _I’m still filled with fear
3 T: c7 L3 N$ s$ u; T" T+ ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% o5 h$ u; I2 V5 M2 d: P! PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! a# {  d) u! J2 T, O: `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ ]" L% P& e  e, V; x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 g7 b8 @8 S" X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) C8 Y, H& d" g2 e5 \, H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 R3 Z! o- ?& B7 y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. b3 }6 ?7 O/ \5 G; e3 C- m3 S* H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 x/ }, q/ K" Q. F: V5 Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! Q- {9 H) d% @% e<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' o' Y8 C* q+ }; r! D4 U' P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 B8 I6 _5 k; ?: m3 V1 R4 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. `# `2 y, U6 r9 U$ Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  R" _5 i3 ~7 x( X9 X9 ?6 J+ c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. P' S- e: c2 ^0 ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- L& ?& E7 f1 G- n  O1 T  A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 S3 v+ F) f' x<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 Q+ s' E# R: M  r8 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! x) _, ^! V; |; H  ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, g% H0 O6 w0 M  j  _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. E6 h' q* f8 j) C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 t0 F' a$ l2 k) H" O  v) x5 @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' k7 Y0 e* p1 F2 V# B4 @: Y) h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- E: {: d- v. D; c! ]7 T" c( @* d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 {9 c+ a( [' H+ N$ p3 E<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 l6 X  s' `& b3 t! Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# G) i6 e+ x7 Q; W) A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# T8 i& a' v* c& j8 G2 x0 [( k) d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, N# g4 i1 ~# D+ ?( V6 v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 c9 w. U7 ~* [$ r1 s: L$ {% Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 f& G3 t& b) H& N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ ~3 c  f$ V5 x# C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 d/ p7 K% q0 C' F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 e( V2 f4 s- r7 }* ~+ `我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; N. y0 Y, Y5 S3 z" r  \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>