【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
8 ^; c* `4 A* u5 @% H袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: M  `+ B/ _+ L+ q9 xThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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! H. n" S$ k4 B  L$ x+ B5 q我想我從未表露出
4 W$ U* C- i* p深藏在我心底的那句
" j' o# C: `2 Z9 r; E2 V我愛你  

$ {9 p; ~+ w+ R/ S$ f, f! b7 j$ RFrom the first moment we met,
& y5 p6 I3 p% L& `3 `8 eI already loved you with all my heart

在遇見你的第一刻
, s/ b( C* n5 S( C3 o4 z你已經深深的佔領了
4 a  {) b/ A: s) J6 C/ w我的心
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We meet and talk everyday,
$ {3 g3 a" t- dBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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5 G4 C8 T% R7 A1 Z9 ~7 f# i! }縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意
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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 W8 [% }0 j5 K! O  jI would probably know how you feel
: D+ @3 m, R* k凝視著你的眼
' k6 j' i6 W& n7 U1 A* z3 B搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
& c4 n* G3 C6 F7 Q# i) D; L/ |你的心情
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& ^% N1 i" @0 _' |Love… just the word love
0 R. A" t$ `: v5 K, y7 s+ ]Why is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
如此難以表白?
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2 l# e& d& W$ p% e) [I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

愛你 想要告訴你
) h& k( c. I& a& ~! H+ y卻總是說不出來

" Q/ Y' S0 h, Z' B4 c% \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- m! l2 A( Z! a4 [! o也許有一天
4 U2 ]/ |) D$ W4 C1 a6 ~9 N你將從我指間滑漏

. X! \& T" z4 sIf today isn’t too late,
9 A, O/ j4 k- N6 E# EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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7 A5 ~! m6 ]" M' v* ~希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
1 X) i' p, D( \3 |1 p- V我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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' j9 L2 s  W2 r0 C不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

4 z3 C- |3 P. e8 q- G% b  ECan I entrust it to you?
) V( ^& m- j& y3 I3 ]% _( T: y9 ZEntrust my love within your heart
, C4 P8 e! f+ d  X: n3 L& b: K可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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( \0 y+ y0 d9 ]" e0 {  HLove… just the word love
$ A$ o7 ]- N+ f- X+ M, Q& A8 KWhy is it so difficult to express?

愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?

I want to confess that I love you,
1 i' J5 d+ H7 R5 A8 c0 _+ R$ xBut I never did

愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來

% J1 T: O( Y: }- k: b: UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

* s+ k7 L3 `6 G9 ?' s5 L也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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# ^. n# P, L" s2 s# ?* AIf today isn’t too late,
/ z( s% |0 Q9 f* bI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

7 o% \4 k, Z: L& g希望今天還不會太晚
' s$ j0 Y$ `; F9 Q讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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2 k1 t5 u  w$ a6 [5 D! g9 yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

+ I3 {- J. \" V7 T$ [- g  V& K不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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9 s! i/ X# c6 D  U9 Z. |Can I entrust it to you?
2 ~3 F1 ]5 B9 k8 x% u; aEntrust my love within your heart

0 A+ R; e+ Y0 F: c可否讓我托付給你?
% [9 O: t2 T3 }) M托付我的愛
$ Q3 Q( l$ L7 K" c) y4 Z1 D收在你心裡

Can I entrust it to you?
  K6 f/ O% i' ~2 i7 i( IEntrust my love within your heart
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8 F# N: q6 e- |  b可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡

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对唱曲参赛译稿

2 o: t3 E* e1 n1 Q4 d3 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% ^  Q/ l# ~( y* [0 v6 gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

皎潔月光下
' T  z+ @8 t$ X* M/ A2 i! i# Y  w天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
9 P. A# P7 T! R0 d/ ~, G我心充滿快樂

3 Z$ w  f  N0 L, FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 i3 [0 Z3 V9 ~2 C; qThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
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月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
; W1 @5 x* }: Q0 h& @月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂

$ t) c( Q$ X/ ?- PIt fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

6 v1 ?8 L) F; a# o我心卻充斥著憂鬱
2 `/ F6 I8 f, B9 a* w5 S害怕我們的愛
終將逝去
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You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
8 @2 P5 l+ T2 a8 {4 H愛你
/ M! d, D% w0 I& K" X堅定不渝
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! h+ {- q+ |9 f& q6 `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me

+ T! r& ?5 h$ D( f& l( u$ ]; c你的一言一語都是愛
6 K( a9 |) D* C- J( G  l我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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" M+ l9 ~" Q# b. a! H4 g+ D% pI love you I love you with all my heart
' ?7 x6 t5 w) [& @1 I5 L% @Nothing can compare to my love

我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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6 l4 h5 ~& Y. Y# W! V0 G, tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?

2 h+ D( [" F. V6 H% p! Z' [能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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% q+ t/ s2 v3 r4 a3 `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 e0 q- r, `7 `# ~整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

3 W5 P/ h1 k6 z3 Y* U( b9 ?' R0 uI want so much to see inside your heart
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我想看透你的心

) L# p: X* p4 t3 ]* q5 v3 xI invite you to rip it out
8 B! ?4 L8 W/ d/ ^To prove my love, I’m willing to die
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: N2 c+ E  z. `: ~$ D) `7 }我歡迎你將它打開
0 `( T* V. t7 A$ h5 R" K我願意用生命
來證明我的愛
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I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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我依然滿心憂鬱
2 S9 Q6 u7 H, E4 J你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000
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( ?- g( T$ c1 e. M0 ^9 c0 r可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
! H  Y9 f2 A$ e$ z5 @遠遠不及千萬

3 k; ^& v1 @/ f1 SWith such a tongue as yours,
" l8 w% \* ^* O" ?' H; U+ `Your speech can’t even keep up with it

這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上

8 F; z' O  X+ Q1 ^; m4 yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 C" N* I, x+ t3 D如果我真有千百張口
9 W0 S3 q; V2 ?我將對你訴說
: M9 \/ ^  g( l8 B千萬個心思

% j, J- Q' t! C  N: Q# }$ @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

訴說千萬個
, G( W% g$ c& T' h% w0 Z愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒